Fragrance
of the scented candles had filled the room. Bed linen shined to its best,
beautiful flowers looked really fresh and were all over the cot. Apart from
giggling of her friends who just dropped her in to this room there was a kind
of enchanting silence that had filled this room. But her heart was beating
unusually loud that she could hear them.
Yes
this is the very first night Theertha will be spending with the person whom she
has whole heartily accepted to be her man. Every girl dreams and will
have mixed emotions about this night, so was she, was she naïve, was she shy,
or was she secretly craving for this night, she was not able to judge her
feelings.
The
marriage rituals happened that morning had drained all her energy but when mom
whispered in her ears that she had to prepare to be with her husband starting
tonight as per their horoscope, there was sort of enthusiasm in her. Theertha
then decides to prepare herself to make her first impression. But the question
was how and what to do to impress him!
Theertha
refreshes herself with a soothing evening hot water bath. Before which she
massages her soft skin in scented oil. She chose the body cream of his favorite
lavender fragrance as it ran down her body she smiled imagining him. She chooses
Saree of his favorite color. Her friends then helped with mild make up, light
jewelries and a good hair do. Giggling and teasing of friends went on till they
were called.
She
was now all dressed and sitting in one corner of that neatly dressed bed, she
could hear her sisters and friends teasing laughing and negotiating with her
husband for their gifts on this special occasion. She knew this would be the
reason for his delay.
She
was very much waiting for him. Yes she started relating to all those romantic
movie songs, she bit her blushful lips mild to be prepared and was imagining all the romantic things that could happen. She closed her eyes
feeling shy about the questions she had in mind where will she get her first
kiss what would impress him more is it her gentle curves or may be her soft
cheeks or her beautifully pedicured soft feet for which she had carefully chosen a beautiful color, will
he hold her tight so much so that she will suffocate to breathe and still not
complain but want him to do it? Will he kiss the neatly done mehandi which had
turned bright red in his love? Will she get to rest on his chest? Will he like
the fragrance of lavender oil on her? Will he tease her with his little bites?
She could feel goosebumps imagining his warm breathe. She was going crazy,
Theertha whole heartedly wanted him. She smirked thinking that no man can
imagine that woman’s secret desires are so beautifully painted.
Suddenly
she hears a loud continuous bang on the door and she heard her mom calling them
both to take bath and come down soon for today’s rituals. She was not able to
relate to anything, it was already morning and she couldn’t remember what had
happened to her beautiful First Night? And to top it all she was beside her
husband he was holding her with all his care. She mildly shook and was very
ashamed to ask him what had happened last night? Her smart husband planted his
second kiss on her and told her that she was deep asleep when he entered the
room and he couldn’t disturb his beautiful bride sleeping and all he did was to
plant his first kiss and hold her in his caring arms to comfort her more.
P.S. This post is inspired by one of the beautiful poems by Nilanjana Bose, TOUCH
Image courtesy www.aainabridal.com
39 comments:
True Feelings Unveiled
Ramyuuu.. why do i feel this is a personal incident :-)
Well ok but the post, wonderfully written. I was hooked to it, and could almost feel the butterfiles a newly wed bride always feels. Very endearing post
Wow such pure words and very pure love. I loved the way it was described - the feelings and the joy , the passion and love. It was simply an awesome read.
It was beautifully written and expressed . I loved the ending and didn't expect it. Keep expressing the lovely feelings....want to know the reason for this blog....I know all your blogs are from day to day observations or coming through meeting people or ......
@Sowmya: lol unveiling of every women :D
@Jenny: LOL :D oh no no :)
Ah thats very nice that it kept you hooked ummmhmmm ;) butterflies yeah yeah I know how it feels lol.
@Ashwini: yeah such pure love in relationship keeps it going so I wanted to write something celebrating it and also :D celebrating womenhood :D
@Gopi: hahaha yeah I just wanted to celebrate womenhood :D particularly for no reason :D and there is one Poem of Nilanjana bose which inspired me to write this post
http://nilabose.blogspot.in/2012/07/touch.html
:D So thats it :D, and Thanks a lot Gopi :D
Very Nice Blog dear!!
Fantastic true description which most of us would have felt the same:)
Really enjoyed it!!
Very beautifully written Akka.. I imagined everything ;)
Ohho Miss Ramya....whats up? Got all romantic....hahaha...just kidding...sweet post dear.
What an anti climax with the twist at the end!!
Cute n awesome at the same time. Very well expressed, Ramya...also feel very flattered, thank you! never thought of my poems as "inspirational", my god :)
@FIF: LOL its just celebrating womenhood buddy :D and also had tried thriller, humor and it was now time for romance in Fiction ;) so thus this post!!!
@Ranju: LOL you imagine ;) who what how lol :D
@Ashwini C: Thanks a tons buddy :D
@KP: Thanksssssssssss :D
@Nilanjana: You are the inspiration so will put up your poem link on my post :D thanks!!!
That was a nice post Ramya. As usual the climax being the highlight!
I am nominating you for the liebster blog award :) Please check in here
http://thelubberwort.blogspot.in/2012/08/let-drums-roll-and-fireworks-burst-as.html
after all that mehnat going to sleep wattay waste ya :D :D.. on a serious note its expressed so nicely :) :)
@Cartic: Vowooooo superb thanks for the award Karthik :D will keep this task for writers block if you dont mind :D is that ok :D cause have done it just a post back already :D
And thanks tons for this wonderful award
:D
@SuKu: LOL yes yes Fulllluuu wasteuuuu ;)
Thanks buddy!
Ramya such a lovely post and so beautifully penned! The ending was equally brilliant! You brought out all the feelings of a newly wed in a very engrossing manner
@Rahul Sir: Thanks a lot :D for your appreciation :D
well written Ramya...
Lovely story, Ramya. You write well. Looking forward to more .. so keep that pen in your hand writing. :-) Blessings to you!
Well, only common thing about the story and me is the last part.. with a slight difference; following the Day, we both fell asleep at night! :D
Emotions of the girl in your words came out very special.. I almost paused reading every single word!!
Good one, Ramya :o)
@Ashok: Thanks a lot :D
@Ellen: Thanks lot for your blessing and will try to meet your expectation :D
@Prashant: yeahhhhhh :D sumaru janadu haage iruthe ;) nandu kooda lol :D HAHA Thanks nice to know I impressed you :D
U sure its only inspired :) and not experienced he he he :)
beautoiful article
Bikram's
@Bikram ;) lol no reply to your first question he hee,
Thanks buddy :D
Ramya, at least in your next blog can I expect the expected story:) :) hahaha
Thanks for the link for Touch, and this is a beautiful touch you have given to one of the most anticipated days in a womans life!
@Santhu: Lol :D expected ending irro stories :) ok will try next time ;)
@Kappu: Yeah Nilanjana Bose writes very nice poems. Thanks a lot dear for your encouragement :D
Wonderfully written
Lovely story and nice climax...
Well… I have no words. Sometimes silence is a great compliment. Breathtakingly beautiful is your writing. You have painted the emotions and feelings so vividly and so beautifully. Extremely touching and it made me smile in happiness all the way. The way you have portrayed such delicate emotions is fascinating. And the ending was so pure and beautiful as well. Superb writing.
@Niveditha: Thanks lot dear :D
@Mithlash: Thanks Buddy :)
@Raj: ahhhhh you encourage me a lot :D, and I made you smile :D Thats awesome :) Thanks a lot for your sweet words :D
:) nice ending!
nicely written with all simplicity yet gorgeous!!!keep writing dear Ramya...GOD LOVE U
@Ash: Thanks dear
@Adhi: Thanks thanks tons Adhi, for all the encouragement and blessings you have showered on me! your words means a lot. Keep encouraging
@Ashwini: Oh my god :d such nice words from you thanks a lot dear, Yeah I really wanted to celebrate the little things we do... I wanted the world to know all the care and interest we take to impress the man we love. :D
But always True love triumphs always!!!
Thanks buddy Thanks a lot
OMG!!! Minnie You have the talent of stealing thoughts....beautifully expressed in words.Good work....
you have expressed feelings/thoughts of theertha so beautifully... Now tell me who is theertha ??? :p it's you yourself? or who was in your mind while writing this? :p
@Vatsala :D Dear :D it can be so many people ;) I, Jen, Ash, FIF and also ;) more recently Vatsala ;) isnt it :D
Thanks tweety for dropping by :D
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