Showered you with kisses, for one last time
Saw you fading far across the river, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there
Reached for your hands, as it rained again
Oh I remember you are no more here, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there
Closed my eyes to pray, only to see you once again
Yes I knew you were long gone, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there
Years have gone, so are the dreams
Aching are my legs, and yet my dear
I will keep walking back on the same path to see if you are
still there
27 comments:
Short and very very sweet! It did touch my heart..
Prose just needs time but Poetry, talent. You seem to have all the talent; keep it up Ramya :o)
@Prashant :D thanks tons, Somehow all the 'poetry like lines' ;) (I am scared to call them poetry) that I have posted till now has not been liked as much as other posts :D
You inspired me today :D thanks again :D
This is beautiful Ramya! Read those lines couple of times. Touching.
And your profile pic is so cute!
@Jenny Haaaaaaaaaaa Thanks dear I am super happy, :)
nice one. felt really moved. keep going.
nice one. felt really moved. keep going.
@gopinath thanks a lot :D and a special thanks for bonus comment :D
@Jenny forgot to tell you :D if hubs is a nice photographer then no worries for tons of profile pic :D
ahh haa :-))) and the pic in the post? Those are your feet? If yes, very pretty :-)
@Jenny :D hehehe no comment ;)
Nice one ree......
hey this is one of the Nrityagram snaps right? beautiful
and yes, the poem too - very nice
oh just wanted to tell you yesteday i watched an Odissi show performed by Sujata Mohapatra and remembered you so much throughout the dance program
nice depiction of longings of separated ones.
nice depiction of longings of separated ones.
Such lovely words, Ramya and the picture was superb:)
@Vyshali: Thanks ri :D
@Sujatha: Thanks a lot ri ;) houdu Nrityagram li taken snap idu :D hubs camera hangide ri ashte :D
OH my is it :) You are Lucky to see her dance she dances like Goddess and I am very blessed that you remebered me and wanted to inform me of this I am very pleased, Thanks Sujatha.
@Arooj: Hey welcome to Chitrana :)
thanks a lot
@Rahul Sir :) Thanks for both the compliments :D
First visit through Ahankara
Very nice poem
@Parthasarathi: Thanks a lot
Welcome to Chitrana :D keep encouraging
Thanks to Ahankara :D
Aww! Love this! Beautiful <3 <3
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@Megha: Welcome to Chittrana :D
Thanks a lot for your encouragement.
Lovely! very moving.
@Nilanjana: Ah comment on poetry from you, ahhhhhhh thankssssssss I am super happy
Lovely post :)
@Ash: Thanks a lot :D Welcome to Chittrana
OK this I have read. Chalo ek to poem padi thi maine pehle :-)
Richness of thoughts, words and literary genius. Extremely touching and a beautiful emotion conveyed so sweetly!
very emotional! nice one!
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