Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass ...
Its about learning to dance in the rain!!!
There are many things in life that will catch your eye
but only a few will catch your heart... Pursue those

This is my small effort to make you smile for a while...






Wednesday, April 25, 2012

To see if you are still there...


Showered you with kisses, for one last time
Saw you fading far across the river, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there

Reached for your hands, as it rained again
Oh I remember you are no more here, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there

 Closed my eyes to pray, only to see you once again
Yes I knew you were long gone, and yet
I walked back on the same path to see if you are still there

Years have gone, so are the dreams
Aching are my legs, and yet my dear
I will keep walking back on the same path to see if you are still there

27 comments:

Prashanth said...

Short and very very sweet! It did touch my heart..

Prose just needs time but Poetry, talent. You seem to have all the talent; keep it up Ramya :o)

Ramya said...

@Prashant :D thanks tons, Somehow all the 'poetry like lines' ;) (I am scared to call them poetry) that I have posted till now has not been liked as much as other posts :D

You inspired me today :D thanks again :D

Jenny said...

This is beautiful Ramya! Read those lines couple of times. Touching.

And your profile pic is so cute!

Ramya said...

@Jenny Haaaaaaaaaaa Thanks dear I am super happy, :)

gopinath said...

nice one. felt really moved. keep going.

gopinath said...

nice one. felt really moved. keep going.

Ramya said...

@gopinath thanks a lot :D and a special thanks for bonus comment :D

@Jenny forgot to tell you :D if hubs is a nice photographer then no worries for tons of profile pic :D

Jenny said...

ahh haa :-))) and the pic in the post? Those are your feet? If yes, very pretty :-)

Ramya said...

@Jenny :D hehehe no comment ;)

Vyshali said...

Nice one ree......

Sujatha Sathya said...

hey this is one of the Nrityagram snaps right? beautiful

and yes, the poem too - very nice

oh just wanted to tell you yesteday i watched an Odissi show performed by Sujata Mohapatra and remembered you so much throughout the dance program

Arooj said...

nice depiction of longings of separated ones.

Arooj said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Arooj said...

nice depiction of longings of separated ones.

Rahul Bhatia said...

Such lovely words, Ramya and the picture was superb:)

Ramya said...

@Vyshali: Thanks ri :D

@Sujatha: Thanks a lot ri ;) houdu Nrityagram li taken snap idu :D hubs camera hangide ri ashte :D

OH my is it :) You are Lucky to see her dance she dances like Goddess and I am very blessed that you remebered me and wanted to inform me of this I am very pleased, Thanks Sujatha.

@Arooj: Hey welcome to Chitrana :)
thanks a lot

@Rahul Sir :) Thanks for both the compliments :D

KParthasarathi said...

First visit through Ahankara
Very nice poem

Ramya said...

@Parthasarathi: Thanks a lot
Welcome to Chitrana :D keep encouraging

Thanks to Ahankara :D

Megha Sarin said...

Aww! Love this! Beautiful <3 <3

love
http://www.meghasarin.blogspot.com

Ramya said...

@Megha: Welcome to Chittrana :D
Thanks a lot for your encouragement.

Nilanjana Bose said...

Lovely! very moving.

Ramya said...

@Nilanjana: Ah comment on poetry from you, ahhhhhhh thankssssssss I am super happy

Ash said...

Lovely post :)

Ramya said...

@Ash: Thanks a lot :D Welcome to Chittrana

Jenny said...

OK this I have read. Chalo ek to poem padi thi maine pehle :-)

Raj said...

Richness of thoughts, words and literary genius. Extremely touching and a beautiful emotion conveyed so sweetly!

Hari Akkavajhula said...

very emotional! nice one!