Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass ...
Its about learning to dance in the rain!!!
There are many things in life that will catch your eye
but only a few will catch your heart... Pursue those

This is my small effort to make you smile for a while...






Monday, February 11, 2013

Not long it takes...


Goes down the beautiful sun, darkness fills all around.
Cries of Owl, howls chilling wind setting in fearful night with no bound.
Not long it takes as there smile the stars, fighting the darkness glittering to its best.
Vanishes the hard night, surrounds mystical view in its beauty sleeps my heart in the cradle of dreams.


Masked were the skies, heavy were the clouds
Many cursed this gloomy day for deep in heart scars were plowed
Not long it takes for birds to chirp and skies to shower the love.
Blooms my soul into flower, fragrance of the first rain fills the world.


Battles are lost, struggles seems to have no meaning, fails the love bruises the tender heart,
Screams clueless mind, suffering in deadly silence of failure accepting that end is now dearer
if only my heart waits for a miracle, not long it takes for winds to change, love to shower,
for success to shine and for life to unlock the beauty as no matter what there is always a key of hope. 

25 comments:

Nuthan said...

Whenever people start to think that your blog is all about fun-posts and being spontaneous.. you prove them wrong!!
Wowww!! cleverly touches the extreme end notes.. !
and if I am not wrong.. it looks like an effort to encourage the reader about perspective thinking. Good one!!

Amith Mendon said...

I'll just say "Woww"

Dheeraj said...

Indeed.. there is Hope and will always be..

Rahul Bhatia said...

This was a different kind of post and a great new style:)

šēţħũ said...

Now this is talent..!! and I can say no more about it :-) Impressive

Himadri Singha said...

Loved your style :)

Ramya said...

@Nuthan: Thanks a lot :) I am very happy that you liked my new try of writing in this style...

And yes you are right I want the reader to know that no matter how dull or sad the time is we just need to have patience and wait for best to come our and when Nature can do it so can we do :)

Happy that you got the exact meaning of it :)

Ramya said...

@Amith Mendon: thanks a lot :)for encouraging me to write more and more :D

@Dheeraj: Yesh hope is one thing which should never be lost

@Rahul sir: Thanks a lot Rahul sir :) your comment encourages me to write more in this style :D

Ramya said...

@Sethu: Thanks a lot sethu :) I was worried a bit to pen a post like this :D now you all have accepted it :D which is such good encouragement to me :D thanks

@Himadri Singha: welcome to Chittrana :)Thanks a lot :D

Binu Thomas said...

I admire the way bloggers try to explore the area which is very different from what they normally post. I try challenging myself too.. its fun. And that's exactly what I felt when I read this post Ramya! Great yaar.. Let it flow! :)

Ramya said...

@Binu: Hey thanks a lot I am extremely happy that you liked my experiment :D I do write poems but it was mostly direct and simple this time tried something complicated as Nuthan told tried to push the readers to perspective thinking :D

Your encouragements keeps me motivated to experiment, Thank you Binu :D

Karunakar Ramarao said...

Too good. Awesome!!!

Prashanth said...

It's nice to experiment and you did a great job with this one...:) If I can some up in one line then it would be:
"Have Patience and the Whole World will be at your feet." It's the hope that matters....:)

Ramya said...

@Prashanth: Yeah tried something different happy that I am getting positive review comments on this :D

Yes you summarized it well, thats exactly what I wanted to convey. :)

Ramya said...

@Karu: thanks a lot ri, happy that you liked it :D

Santhoshkumar LM said...

GooD!!

Nivedita Chirantan said...

Beautiful poem... you should write more poems.. you have a definite talent for that :)

Nilanjana Bose said...

Oooh, poetry! my fav form completely! :) yes the key of hope opens all locks..

Ramya said...

@Santhu: Thanks a lot :)

@Niveditha: so I should venture more in to it then :D lol

@NB: oh my good appreciation from you for poetry :) is like an award for me :D thanks a lot Nilanjana

Swarna said...

Yes it does not take much time for wind to change. Very nice lines.

Ramya said...

@Swarna: thanks a lot for comingby :) Happy that you liked the lines :D

Jenny said...

All the paras had a ray of hope. If there is darkness and owls then there are the stars twinkling out there, giving us hope. If there are dark clouds and thunders, then there are the beautiful rains. I loved the metaphors, and the poem runs deep into some great meanings. hands down, your poetry writing skills are my favorite :-)

Ramya said...

@Jenny: Wow thanks thanks this is exactly what I wanted the readers to see in... Yes Jen I wanted everyone to know that there are difficulties but then in ever difficulties if you have patience to wade through it then there is a beautiful ray of hope waiting for us...

Very happy that you liked the lines :) Poetry is always very difficult for me need to do really hard work to comeup with lines :D you have appreciated it and made my day thanksssssss

Ashwini C N said...

Very different from your normal posts. Liked how profound the words and its usage was. Yes, there is always that one thing called hope that helps us push back a bad day and come forward to embrace another wonderful day. Lovely words Ramya :-)

Ramya said...

@Ashwini: Thanks a lot dear :D yeah tried something new and happy that you all have liked it and more so everybody got that exact message what I wanted to convey and so I am even more happy :D