Life is not about waiting for the storms to pass ...
Its about learning to dance in the rain!!!
There are many things in life that will catch your eye
but only a few will catch your heart... Pursue those

This is my small effort to make you smile for a while...






Monday, January 27, 2014

Mind my heart





There sets the sun,
Leaving a picturesque hue
Perplexed is my heart is it the end
But smiles my mind as it’s an onset of new.

There sheds the green leaves,
Leaving behind an empty wood
Conflicts my heart to let it go
But says my mind to see beyond the bare hood

There swings the broken cage,
Shattering my love flees the bird
Aches my heart in betrayal rage
But mind mocks for whining at rightful tread.

There waves the hand wishing me good bye
Leaving behind a million memories
Shivers my heart and cries aloud why 
As always consoles my mind to let go and recreate.

20 comments:

Rahul Bhatia said...

Conflict of heart and mind well expressed, Ramya! A new avtaar as a poet... good going:)

Sri Valli said...

Beautiful poem! Love the way you connected the brain, heart, feelings and nature :)

ಅರವಿಂದ ಕುಲಕರ್ಣಿ said...

Very nice... "Manassu mattu Midulugala Maatu Muktavaagi Moodibandive"...

KParthasarathi said...

I never knew the talented poet in you.That was a very nice one though could have been on a happy note to start with.

Badarinath Palavalli said...

ಕವಿತೆಯ ಹೂರಣ ಮತ್ತು ರಚನೆಯಲ್ಲಿನ ಕೌಶಲ್ಯತೆ ಮೆಚ್ಚುಗೆಯಾಯಿತು.

ಮೇಡಂ ನಮಗಾಗಿ ನೀವೇಕೆ ಕನ್ನಡದಲ್ಲೂ ಕವನ ಬರೆಯಬಾರದು?

Sathya said...

Awesome and Very true one!!!Superb!!

A Homemaker's Utopia said...

Very nice poem :-)

Bharath Kumar said...

Nice, but y this poem now suddenly

Ashwini C N said...

Wonderfully written Ramya. The mind-heart conflicts are the most scary ones. Because you never know who is right or who to listen to. Very nicely written :-)

Ramya said...

@Rahul sir :) Thanks a lot, I am happy that you liked my post

@KP: Thanks a lot happy that u see a poet in me :)


Rahul sir and KP :) Just wanted you to know that :) this is not the first time I am attempting poems :D

http://ramya-chitrana.blogspot.in/2012/06/poetess-in-me-is-waiting-to-hear-from.html

Ramya said...

@Sri Valli: thanks a lot dear happy that you could see that connection :)

@Arvind Kulkarni: Meshtre you have been constant encouragement :) so that again for your kind words

@Badari: Hello Badari avare Thanks for coming here and encouraging me :D. nimagoskara will try to write something in kannada :) and will share it with you soon :)

Ramya said...

@Sathya and @ Homemaker
:) thanks a lot for dropping by and encouraging :)

@Bharath: :) hahahha I did not actually see the Muhurtham :) next time u help me when to write what :P

@Ashwini: yes dear thats exactly what I wanted to depict the confusions the conflicts with in us :)

g.mruthyunjaya said...

Mature one!

Anamika said...

hey Rams,
I always knew that you are a multi talented person, but never visualised the poet in you. gGood work. keep it going.

Ramya said...

@Muttudodappa: Thanks for coming here and encouraging :) thing is u were the first one to appreciate me work when I was a kid :) thanks for all that :)

@Anamika: hahaha :P thanks for coming here but lai what is this u dint know I do scribble poems I am surprised!

Found In Folsom said...

Wow...nice girlie...didn't know you wrote poetry so well :)

Binu Thomas said...

Ohh.. a poem! New things are happening it seems! Wonderful..

Ramya said...

@FIF: hahhaa have done it before :D may be even before we became blog buddies :D

@Binu :)nope old things in new avatar Binu :D

Here you go!

http://ramya-chitrana.blogspot.in/2012/06/poetess-in-me-is-waiting-to-hear-from.html

Krishna/കൃഷ്ണ said...

Nice poem.. well expressed...

thanks

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