A beautiful windy
evening, whistle of the breeze hymning outside, I
reluctantly got up to light a candle hoping to brush away your memories and the
darkness, but then the sparkle of the candle in that dark room was it lit for
light or was it lit to remind me of your curious eyes looking at me?
I pulled
over my warm blanket as it’s a cold night which is making me shiver as the cold
wind tingles but in reality it’s your thought which made me shiver mildly. How
this rainy season tickles an indispensable trail of memories which keeps
floating in the sea of thoughts.
These mist
filled mornings which seems cloudy and about to pour just holds all the
moisture and refuses to shower, this reminds me of myself holding all my love
for you and yet refusing to shower it on to you.
How nice the
birds chirp around the bush, may be they all are calling their loved ones and
chirping their love to them. Wondering why this smooth music got tears in my
eyes, maybe I am missing my name whispered romantically by you in my ears.
As the rain
showered this morning, pouring all its love and the earth turned red in the
love of nature, I stepped into warm tub to cleanse myself but was actually
hoping to cleanse my thoughts which were all about you but how could I escape as the gentle flow of warm water caressing me made me close my
eyes to remember your desiring arms touching me
Oh I blushed
thinking whom to blame it on, is it my crazy love for you or is it the elegant
onset of monsoon, Or is it your insatiable desire for me which has left a mark of
all those countless hisses and kisses. Thought
of all these was a mistake once upon a time, but if only the mistake is so sweet, I would
love to commit the same mistake again and again…
Oh I blushed,
in the beautiful panache of monsoon…
P.S: My way of welcoming monsoon ...
Thanks to my friend who shared this picture which kindled me to write this post.
Thanks to my friend who shared this picture which kindled me to write this post.
34 comments:
Sweet mistakes .. blame it on the weather :)Passionate writing, Ramya!
nice one
Good one beautiful :)
Its an actual way to derive moments in anyone's life which convinces mind to live again.:)
Good one Ramya...
@Rahul sir: thanks a lot for see that passion :D yeah will blame it on weather :D
@Aliasgar: thanks a lot for coming over here :D
@Nandan: thanks Nandan :D happy that you liked
@Valay: Wow how true yeah such beautiful moments and memories convinces one to live every moment :D
Thanks a lot
Loved it :-)
I had wrote one last monsoon,if you would want to read.
http://silent-drashti.blogspot.in/2012/08/rain-drops.html
Thanks- Happy writing
Everyone has their own interpretations about monsoon, and about everything else in general. Rain makes us get inside and think in solitude.
Just like they say that February is the month when babies cry the least (because of 28/29 days), I think rain/snow is the weather when most literature is written :-)
Loved it. The flow of words is just awesome. Enjoy the monsoon.
@KK: yeah rightly said, everybody have their own ways of interpreting things :D different views of same vision! and thats why life is beautiful isnt it?
@Gopinath: thanks a lot for all ur appreciation.
What's up girlie? ;)
it looks beautiful.i have been found Blush makeup palette for a long time.
@FIF: heheheh Blush Blush :P
@aol: Thanks :)
Beautiful flow of thought. Loved the picture as well, it's captured very well.
@Ramakanth: Thanks a lot for your encouragement, Will surely convey your appreciation to my friend.
Nature always brings out the best of poetry and Prose.. and among Nature, rain, sunset, sunrise and weather are top contenders for inspirational write-ups and among those write-ups your post seems to be a top contender!!
This post reflects it's inspiration(OR trigger) ... from sunrise to sunset ..(morning, evening and night). That's the highlight for me and of-course intense emotions. Nice!!.
What a welcome...!!! Impressive flow of thoughts and even impressively penned down :-) loved it..!!!
@Nuthan: My god thanks a lot :D thats exactly what I wanted to depict in my blog post, Monsoon from over few hrs of a day :) and how the emotions mingle with it:D, Really thankful for reading between the lines and encouraging me.
@Sethu: Thanks a lot Sethu :D happy that you liked it :D
Woww... what a way to bring imagination to life!! Beautifully written!!
@Amith: Thanks a lot for your appreciation :D happy that you liked it :D
Ooh romantic-poetic! ;-)Goes well with rains. Enjoy the monsoons!
@NB: Thanks a lot. yeah you too enjoy the rains :D
I love rains too! its just that they make me momre emotional (cough and cold is what I intend here) :P
Nice one Ramya :)
@Binu: hahaha you are the second person who can think of only negative things about monsoon and rains :D I have ever come across in my life :D
lol :D thanks for dropping by
beautiful!! Monsoon makes such romantics of us :D :D
vow!!! it's just so beautiful... <3
Cheers to the Monsoon and the lovely cuddly feelings it brings :)
@M: You bet :D thanks for coming here
@SuKu: thanks happy that u liked
@Jyoti: really :D a big cheer :D
@Ash: thanks a lot dear very happy that u liked it :D
super!!
@Santhosh: Hey thanks a lot for coming back :D happy that u liked
nice...
thanks
your passion of writing rocks.. keep writing....
@Krishna: Thanks a lot.
@Manasvi: Thanksss thats a huge compliment :D thanks for all the encouragement
Awesome use of words and what better way to welcome the rains, sure the rain gods would be smiling..:) I think you should show it your hubby, he would surely appreciate it...:) Keep it coming...:)
@Prashanth: thanks a lot for your appreciation, happy that you liked it.
Yes yes he is my first reviewer :D
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